Who knows what you said? Who knows what I replied? I am trying to find the mention of your name in this silence. How important was the call of oceanic desires for you? How important was the call of serenity for me? I am trying to find your broken dreams in this silence. When did solitude turn an agony for you? When did solitude turn a habit for me? I am trying to find your fake smile in this silence. What paved the way of unusual stride for you? What paved the way of refrainment for me? I am trying to find your mayhem in this silence. Where do you live? Where do I belong? I am trying to find you in this silence.
In thuis cacophonic world, silence is mayhem. Well put… 🤫❤️
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This piece is too deep and beautifully written. Emotions pouring in every word. 💛
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It’s my pleasure reading your posts!
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Wonderful writing.
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Thank you so much Kritika✨✨
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So beautifully written .. superb selection of words for expressing such deep feeling and emotions .. very well done .. keep it up .. always keep smiling 😊
Happy poetry 👍🤗
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Happy reading to you ✨✨
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Amazing poetry 👍👍👍
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Thanks Garima✨✨
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You said a very deep things, through these lines. Nice post 👌👌
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A profound piece of poetry! Well written, Sheena💕
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Marvellous lines ma’am🙏😊
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Nice blog
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Listen the silence
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What an amazing poem. It is only in stillness and silence that the omniscience is to be found
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Thanks for your appreciation✨✨
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Like!! Great article post.Really thank you! Really Cool.
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Thanks a lot😇😇
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Beautiful poem…silence in mayhem!
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Thanks for your appreciation😇😇
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My pleasure Sheena
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Course and commented:
The Sound of Silence
https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2020/08/15/under-african-skies-paul-simon/
Hi Sheena
Thanks for the follow(s) …and/or like(s)
I just realised my days are determined and lead down paths from the feedback by my readers and followers around the world, like you. So thanks for the input.
All your comments and feedback encourage (greatly), uplift and even inspire me to follow “this road less travelled”.
I love my days “interacting with you’ guys and gals’ (and anything else in these uncertain* days-very)”
“waking up sleepy-head” craig
“the world’s fourth worst writer”
see
https://johnsphotopics.wordpress.com/2016/01/09/why-im-only-the-worlds-fourth-worst-writer/
and
https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2018/10/09/why-im-only-the-worlds-fourth-worst-writer-3/
* and definitely NOT a police constable)
Still
“Driven to uplift, encourage and (perhaps even) inspire”
https://craigsquotes.files.wordpress.com/2017/10/path-emerson.jpg?w=605&h=454
…”of chaos” (in the “real world”, so says “the nurse”)
https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2018/04/24/do-not-go-where-the-path-may-lead-go-instead-where-there-is-no-path-and-leave-a-trail-6/
Together, one mind, one life (one small step at a time), let’s see how many people (and lives) we can encourage, impact, empower, enrich, uplift and perhaps even inspire to reach their fullest potentials ¦and strive for and perhaps one sunny day even achieve their wildest dreams.
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Thank you🙌
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