Silence

Who knows what you said?
Who knows what I replied?
I am trying to find the mention of your name in this silence.

How important was the call of oceanic desires for you?
How important was the call of serenity for me?
I am trying to find your broken dreams in this silence.

When did solitude turn an agony for you?
When did solitude turn a habit for me?
I am trying to find your fake smile in this silence.

What paved the way of  unusual stride for you?
What paved the way of  refrainment for me?
I am trying to find your mayhem in this silence.

Where do you live?
Where do I belong?
I am trying to find you in this silence.

35 Comments Add yours

  1. bentrein says:

    In thuis cacophonic world, silence is mayhem. Well put… 🤫❤️

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  2. alwayswithlovekat says:

    This piece is too deep and beautifully written. Emotions pouring in every word. 💛

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    1. Thank You💕💕

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      1. alwayswithlovekat says:

        It’s my pleasure reading your posts!

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  3. Kritika says:

    Wonderful writing.

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    1. Thank you so much Kritika✨✨

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  4. Manish Shah says:

    So beautifully written .. superb selection of words for expressing such deep feeling and emotions .. very well done .. keep it up .. always keep smiling 😊
    Happy poetry 👍🤗

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    1. Happy reading to you ✨✨

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      1. Garima Puri says:

        🤗🤗

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  5. Garima Puri says:

    Amazing poetry 👍👍👍

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    1. Thanks Garima✨✨

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      1. Garima Puri says:

        🤗🤗

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  6. Yogesh D says:

    You said a very deep things, through these lines. Nice post 👌👌

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      1. Yogesh D says:

        🙏✨✨

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  7. Nathi says:

    A profound piece of poetry! Well written, Sheena💕

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    1. Thank you💕💕💕

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      1. Nathi says:

        You’re welcome!!

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  8. ShankySalty says:

    Marvellous lines ma’am🙏😊

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    1. Thanks a lot✨✨

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    1. Thank you✨✨✨

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    1. Listen the silence

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  9. What an amazing poem. It is only in stillness and silence that the omniscience is to be found

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation✨✨

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  10. Like!! Great article post.Really thank you! Really Cool.

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    1. Thanks a lot😇😇

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  11. Navin says:

    Beautiful poem…silence in mayhem!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation😇😇

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      1. Navin says:

        My pleasure Sheena

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  12. craig lock says:

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Course and commented:
    The Sound of Silence
    https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2020/08/15/under-african-skies-paul-simon/

    Hi Sheena

    Thanks for the follow(s) …and/or like(s)

    I just realised my days are determined and lead down paths from the feedback by my readers and followers around the world, like you. So thanks for the input.

    All your comments and feedback encourage (greatly), uplift and even inspire me to follow “this road less travelled”.

    I love my days “interacting with you’ guys and gals’ (and anything else in these uncertain* days-very)”

    “waking up sleepy-head” craig

    “the world’s fourth worst writer”

    see

    https://johnsphotopics.wordpress.com/2016/01/09/why-im-only-the-worlds-fourth-worst-writer/

    and
    https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2018/10/09/why-im-only-the-worlds-fourth-worst-writer-3/

    * and definitely NOT a police constable)

    Still

    “Driven to uplift, encourage and (perhaps even) inspire”

    https://craigsquotes.files.wordpress.com/2017/10/path-emerson.jpg?w=605&h=454

    …”of chaos” (in the “real world”, so says “the nurse”)

    https://craigsbooks.wordpress.com/2018/04/24/do-not-go-where-the-path-may-lead-go-instead-where-there-is-no-path-and-leave-a-trail-6/

    Together, one mind, one life (one small step at a time), let’s see how many people (and lives) we can encourage, impact, empower, enrich, uplift and perhaps even inspire to reach their fullest potentials ¦and strive for and perhaps one sunny day even achieve their wildest dreams.

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